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Innocence-Violation by ~stardustfox6:iconstardustfox6:



Stripped them of there innocence
Where on earth was your common sense?
Your stupid mistake engraved into mind
How could you let yourself be so unkind?

You say it’s Love but it’s clearly lust
Now would you say what you did is just?
10 years down the track they remember every touch
All the things they wish they could forget so much

Afraid of the day they were to fall for someone
Dreading their affection would come similarly undone
They’re reminded everyday of the sins you committed
But you don’t care, judging by the emotions you emitted

All the things you did were part of your game
You posses no responsibility, guilt or shame
They’re forced not to hate you and see you every once a while
You would feel shame if you saw the pain behind their smile.
©2006-2009 ~stardustfox6
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Author's Comments

I was thinking about stuff like this the other day and decided to write a poem on it. i dont like this one so much as the other one i submitted today but eh.... the name and the poem fit together well i think, and i dont really know how to describe the meaning... jus important kind of. It would have liked this poem to be better but i can never find the right words...

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:iconfelixrj:
That was almost the reason why I never wanted to fall in love, EVER. Everywhere I looked I found lust. My best friend was the only acception I truely found. Well... Until that one day ^^

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Today is a gift, that is why it is called the present.
:iconstardustfox6:
Yesh... the world becomes a sick sad place sometimes T-T but thats what makes finding true friends/love and other great things like that, that bit more meaningful ^^ :hug:

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I'm not short, I'm FUNSIZE :D
:iconfelixrj:
That's very true! :glomp:

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Today is a gift, that is why it is called the present.
:iconnekarra:
*agree with people* I wish people could learn the difference. :( Yes, but finding the right one is that much better. ^_^

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~Let the dreams carry you away~
:glomp: Fweeeeee!!!! :silentkitty:
:iconstardustfox6:
Yeah T-T i read medieval stories and people seemed to have so much of a better idea about what love was, of coure there were sleazebags then too, but more so now T-T silly peoples :nod: ^^

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I'm not short, I'm FUNSIZE :D
:iconshards-of-memorie:
wow great poem its really meaningful lolz stop saying ure a bad poet!!!!!!!!!!! your a fantastic poet! keep up the great work :)
:iconstardustfox6:
aww Thanks a bunch =3
I AM A BAD POET X3

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I'm not short, I'm FUNSIZE :D
:iconshards-of-memorie:
NO URE NOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
:iconget-shiny:
the last line has to be my favorite. when i read a peom and the last line does not leave a good impact on me, then i dont like the whole thing. but this last line here....made the whole poem come together and end as strong as it had started.

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fool me once, shame on you...fool me twice shame on me.

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